All Comments on 'The Family He Never Knew Ch. 01'

You better keep this going

This is going to turn out to be quite a story and I cannot WAIT to read it. Please Continue it!

I really like the story so far. Like the user below me wrote, kinda odd that the mother moved so quickly on her son, however, I'm reading this as enjoyment, nothing serious. I look forward to the next chapter.

I look forward to the next chapter.

It will be nice to see when he gets to have both Amy and Ashley. Maybe they'll even decide to expand the family with him.

I'll be eagerly awaiting the next part of this story.

I hope for more detailed descriptions of all the girls. I hope all the girls love anal.

This is my third story and i loved all three of them. They have all been hot and i love how imaginative and detailed and varied the topics are. Ive been looking for a place to read sex stories online and i think i found my niche, so to speak. I also loved "caught again" and the one about lisa and her father. I think that one is called "5 years of lust" Keep up the awesome, sexy heat!!!!

for the arrival of the sisters

Great story can't wait for part 2

Loved the story I noticed one spelling mistake but it wasn't a big deal. It also could be a little longer, but it is still a great beginning. If you need an editor email me and I will be more than happy to help you out

Can't wait for part two. This one was excellent. Hurry with the next chapter.

Great start of a series. I hope that you are have fun in writing a 2nd chapter, or more.

I can't wait for the next part, this is the most interesting story I have read in awhile.

Thank you for your time and effort.

Loved your story. Keep writing. Very good. ENcore!!

cant wait for ch 2.

Please make this a long series. Including many family and outside encounters.

how did the dad make babies with 2 inch hard dick?

Its only meant to be a story,should the author choses to write is out to him of her.

what an excellent start. i'm certain the build up will be worth it.

keep them cumming.

Looking forward to when the next chapter comes out.

are you going to continue more on this series?

should be even better when the sisters join in. Hope he has lots of energy.

fun, sexy, short story!