All Comments on 'The Girl from Nepal Ch. 02'

I'm still trying to mentally process this one..might just need to re-read the first two again....ladybird

I have no time for the nepalese,especially the ghurkas a bunch of free loading little creeps who are very good at taking [or trying to take the english government on].Most that I know are a bunch of drunks living on a glory which maybe their ancestors deserve.If they are so loyal why dont they piss off back to Nepal[a lovely country].I just so happen to be half Prussian,[ arrogant and does not whinge]who lives in an english town.I am sick of their whinging,so I have little time for this story,a shame really because its not to bad

You're still one of my favorite authors but this particular story is not quite to my liking. I'm not as passionate as the poster below disliking the Nepalese but I am not connecting with your main characters. Comparing BES to Fabio ... I'm sorry but yuck lol. I never found Fabio to be particularly handsome or hot. So the image was a turn off. I think I will pass on this story and await for your next.

I love this story, I'm so glad you're continuing it!

i'm enjoyin this story and i'm glad you decided to pick it back up again!

Why cant people like t43 just read the story and not get into racism ? If he has any problems with the gurkhas or the nepalese he can take it up elsewhere ( ..... even up his ...). In here, he/she?? would be better off just commenting on the story

So is the machine a machine or not? o_O

Another great chapter.

The story line is good but the background seems wrong. People of Nepal are Nepalese n ppl from India are Indians.They are not the same and belong to two different independent countries.

Also the story seems out of place. There is no link between the futuristic theme and girl from Nepal thing. It wud do the story justice to be set in an imaginary place than in an actual country with no links whatsoever.