All Comments on 'The Homework Room'

A well written beginning ( I hope) of a multi- part tale of love and awakening for the twins. I see an opportunity for Ellen to become an ally/advocate for them, perhaps warning then of the perils of the path they're starting down. Keep the love. Save any twisted kinks for another story in another category. Please.

waiting for the next part...

Nicely done. Ben and Rachel might have gone a little more slowly in reality, and they might have actually been 3 to 5 years younger, but the progression seemed fairly reasonable. Many young teens might well go through something like this scene, even if they don't go any further - and why not? Sexual curiosity is natural and normal, and needs to be satisfied in some manner, and why not with someone easily available. Who is more available than a brother or sister - likely having similar curiosity. I'd - naturally - like to know more of where these two go, but this has a satisfaction level of its own.

Please continue this... i enjoyed the twins simple thoughts...

yes another chapter where they further

omg you got to my boner my get too big if not...

I have to agree with so.e of the others. Nicely written and I hope there are more chapters to come.

Waiting for part 2!

Nice to hear the guy was not 18" long

Hope there is more to this story if so can't wait to read it

More please....Can't wait for the sequel....

You really can't leave it at just one chapter, can you ?

Love your style. You now have a captive audience, don't keep us waiting.

too short