All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 04'

Excellent series of stories. Well written.

Well done Mr. S.

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A fun ride....just once in my life I'd like that kind of opportunity

Glad to see them circle around to actually being *together*, not just accessories or sexual props. I really like these two together, and I'm glad to see them move towards a potentially more permanent relationship. Keeping the loophole for the sisters still works for me, too.

Sweet, tender, beautifully written, this chapter in some ways is the best yet in this wonderful romance story, although its brevity is regrettable. There is a definite improvement in the dialog, with less profanity and the using of the Lord's name in vain (not appropriate any way for a romance story).

Nicely done Storyman

Thanks for writing

Great set of stories only problem is it is over but you writ very well and tell a great story.

Great story for another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING STARS!

Another great chapter!

5

Great fun but can't see why you posted it in the romantic section; definitely incestuous

I read stories on Literotica to be pleasantly entertained and let me say that this author has nailed it on target. The characters were great and enjoyable. Wish I could meet women like Amy and Francine and Susie and Devon and Judy. I would definitely go nuts trying to deal with the five of them. Poor Robert ... I hope he is still alive and well. :))) Of course, I wish this story would continue at least one or two more chapters. I love the humour and of course all the action within. Great writing !

It is a good story, as all of yours are. BUT, this series belongs in erotic couplings and the sudden "come to Jesus" discussion at the end is too sharp of a turn for your characters to consider it credible. The women are hot, the sex is hot, but the core story arc is hallow. 4*

Thanks for bringing a story to a happy ending with just the two... could use another chapter, you know, the "now you know the rest of the story"... love the story!!

Loved it you really have a fantastic talent for writing please keep it up for all your followers.

Good finish... thanknyou.

Excellent ending. Well done!