All Comments on 'The Implant Pt. 02'

All these wireless devices running around in half the population... It sounds like the ideal playground for high-school computer students that are into hacking for fun, or adult hackers taking implants hostage for bit coin or bank transfers.

I still love the concept and scenarios, but I found this chapter a little too disjointed for my tastes. Too much 'fore-shadowing', not enough 'reveal'. Sometimes a tease and a hint is all that's needed, but the reader doesn't always have a clear conception of what's in the writer's head, so usually things need to be 'spelled out' and/or elaborated with more detail.