All Comments on 'The Long Weekend Ch. 01-05'

You are good at copying and pasting another authors story. I'm sure you have their permission to copy their work

i am the same author

i somehow got locked out of my site and my numerous emails to literotica were not responded to.

as i had written 14 chapters, i finally gave up and decided to repost from the begining

i enjoyed it ,hope you will post the rest soon...

Then why do you refer to this as your first story at the top of the first page if you have 14 others written as another user name?

Clarify!

Till I get to the last couple paragraphs. You introduce Stella, the hottest thing in this whole damn dismal deal, and just walk away. Boaring!

whether the story is yours or not, it suffers from careless writing. you can't seem to keep track of the son's name, confusing him with Randy. and to describe a woman as wonton is not good. chinese food is not sexy.

This story feels like it was written by a twelve year old.......

Just sayin'

I orgasmed about 5 times throughout the entire story, could have been that I was super horny, but thank you for writing that, ignore what these haters say, they cannot even speak English properly, let alone write it. English is my second language and I am better than them at it. Thanks again, I will be reading the next chapters over the next few nights!

i have just begun reading this submission, and was wondering when and how did this relationship start between JR & ANNIE. She has eluded to the possibility of SR being suspicious.

Did I miss an earlier submission?

It's a good story and I've read much worse writings. Following BTS with my daughter I get the Sr, Jr thing and how they have so much control of the woman. I don't like that part of their culture but it was hard to understand if Annie was not allowed to masturbate when she wanted pleasure why was it okay for her to give that boy a bj?

I sure hope you have Stella involved with a foursome on their way home Sunday.

Good story so far. I like Dom/sub relationships. Am waiting for son to pu ish mother.