All Comments on 'The Lovers'

And in the loving wives section of all places. How ironic for some cheating wife story lovers. This is what the section is for IMHO. Thank you.

I do love a good romance of love and passion.

Thank you

The title says it all.

Boyd

It doesn't get any more loving than this. A wondeful couple and wonderful loving!!

Sorry, but this story sucked.

Too much purple prose and simili for my taste. Eeek...this sentence in particular made me giggle: "I leave the room to attend the seed of your loins and the fruit of my womb." The last part reminded me of the cereal Fruit Loops.

I have just read this,I will remind the author that this is an erotic PORN site,I have read better than this in the agony aunts column of a daily newspaper.

I cannot read stuff written in this tense...so boring

why write in this tense - no one ever does and makes any story incomprehensible....

Was she ..

- unconscious

- doped to the eyeballs

- just plain forgetful

- somewhere else?

Why did she have to be told/reminded.

1*

Obviously not what the masturabators or BYB crowd come here for, but very well done, indeed.

Normally, I dislike second person singular, but you pulled it off! (The very few spots were she could not have definitively known what he thought or felt were somehow akin to what her thoughts and feelings were at that point, so it worked. Or it could have been her post-coital dream, from which the crying child awoke her.)

The critics just don't like that you've put a truly loving wife story in the "Loving Wives" category.

Nothing not to like in this one. I enjoyed it.