by deadeye_76
I'm not usually one to condone the addition of others in a relationship. The build-up of thisd story has been handled well. I have only read one from the male POV (cuckold) that was worthy of mention, but this has the same feeling of serious consideration between the couple that is the basis for a decent relationship. The biggest thing is communication. This couple seems to be open and honest with each other, although there are times I would have allowed more opportunity for recollection between the emotions of both parties. So far, the wife seems driven by the lust and doesn't see any possibility for trouble - it is always there when you add "another unknown ingredient".
Future chapters could go on with blissful fornication, but the daring author would suggest some form of muddy water. Call it fetish (where he focuses on actually getting the babysitter to become pregnant - working on the pregnancy fetish) or transcendence in plot (most couples do not live as carefree and un-argumentative lives as this) so far we see no tension. That definitely needs to change to get that 5th star
You announced the babysitter episode. But it was not the usual at-her-place-when-he-took-her-home. Combining it with the lingerie modeling was so much hotter.
It's 5 am and hard to stop reading.
Paul in Oklahoma
At some point he needs to fuck and impregnate a black woman. That's like the ultimate turn-around from the usual cuckold crap. Hell, have the wife turn her Husband into a breeding stud for many a horny women looking to conceive. That would be good.
I was thinking it would be nice if Karen left a note to thank Ann for the loan of her husband. I wanted to read it. But he invited Karen in to meet his wife. Now I would have liked to hear THAT conversation. You don't go wrong with gratitude. Guess I cannot get everything I want. So it could have been better, after all.
No anal, please.
It's been long enough since the first time that it's like reading it fresh. Nice.
Paul in Oklahoma