by alwaysreadyfryou
Great story and a hot twist at the end, keep it going please!
That's all I got... Kinda speechless after that!
This story was great , definitly need more. Would have given it a 10 if they let us
loved the story, nicely done. hope you add more stories to the site
Come on dude everybody in the history of fairy tales know that Genies are tricksters. Surely this guy wasn't the one person on the planet who didn't know that you can't trust a Genie.
Really liked it!
If I was being critical, I'd say the descriptions could have been richer; but, nonetheless, this is a great story, great premise and really arousing!