All Comments on 'The Model and the Artist'

Well written and extremely hot.

This was really hot action but I never felt that I was there, in the moment. For me what was missing was the dialog. Descriptions are nice, and you certainly have good ones. I particularly liked the whole paragraph about rest your member between her legs and her playing with it and her looking like female perfection, sweaty and horny. Now if she only spoke, that would have made me hard as steel.

Starting out as friends with just a hint of desire at least on her part was kind of sweet. Kind of makes it a relationship built on a strong foundation that could stand the test of time.

wow, that was hot, I had an intense orgasm well before the end. A great writer of erotic fantasy 5* i will read more stories by this author