All Comments on 'The Naughty Nymph across the Street Ch. 02'

Thanks!

It's a good story, with a lot of potential for further chapters.

Maybe a Ch 3 telling us about the daughters' night?

I'm usually skeptical of agreeing with anything signed by "Anonymous", but in this case, I do have to agree. There is marvelous opportunity to continue this story, maybe a third chapter with Kaila moving in and Gen taking over Kaila's house and at the end of that chapter, Gen moving in also. Then a fourth chapter with more info on the daughters' reactions to dad's young girlfriend (and possibly their personal attempt to 'live' with his abilities with such younger "friends"...)

Novels and Novellas with only two very short chapters

Pet peeve: A person shakes their head side to side, in a non-verbal indication of no fucking way.

Conversely, a person nods their head to indicate agreement, or go for it, asshole.

Using the opposite non verbal communication symbol is as jarring to a reader as writing no for yes, or yes for no.

GeoD