All Comments on 'The New Stepdad Ch. 01'

Because he sure doesn't know what the hell he's doing.

Great

interested in the rest. But in all, not worse than a lot of other stories on Lit. So, if you need to continue, be my guest.

Wake us when you LEARN TO WRITE, Loser!

Very enjoyable,keep going.

I would really like to see Brad and Janice share Sylvia!

More please

great humiliation scene

Yep. Definitely keep going!

Good Story. Pretty well written and a very interesting premise. As far as the negative comment is concerned, pay no attention. He said it all when he signed his name as "Loser".

You should definitely go on with this piece, it's a great start!!

Please keep it going.

please.

nope not into mothers humilating son's without him gwtting some benefit from it if she isn't going to instruct him in at least being a good pussy eater or something to that effect. I just don't see it.

But I am a little biased my mother hooked up with a guy, a young dude and thought he was a stud or something to that effect, I didn't do anything to him but my mother got very upset when I fucked his mother and both his sisters and then since I came of age and gained control of my trust fund. I cut the funds off and had the little shit arrested for drug possession. In other words I made my mother grovel or she could live with him and be broke. Well she is now the live in nanny and I am married to one of her ex-boytoy's sisters and the other lives with us and I have kids by both.

Moral if you going to fuck someone as young as your son make sure your son likes him especially if son is going to end up holding the proverbial keys to the kingdom someday. Plus if she was going to pretend to fuck her son she should have just asked I not only had the bigger dick I was a lot more skilled at using it. But since she fuck the asshole I wouldn't even think about it now.

good one. 5*

Pure trash, fantasy from a dickless wonder...

Cuck had oughta give Ma and Pa an ass whooping.