All Comments on 'The Next Game Master Pt. 01'

by EmotionalStorm

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Considerably better grammar and spelling

Great work, I was reading your story unironically for the plot, set within a very good premise of D&D. The grammatical errors that littered the first have been reduced. The longer story was very enjoyable. Cheers EmotionalStorm!

gregsjln over 4 years ago

Thank you

Loving your story so far, keep it up.

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