All Comments on 'The Old House We Bought'

Hoping this is the start of few chapters story. May there a lot of banging ( construction and sexual.

1* fag cuck shit

God, what trash! Written for the deeply disturbed and to make others angry. A real asshole writer.

Purile

Sadly, almost unreadable…

This writers stories get more ludicrous every time. In the universe of these stories there is no fidelity, no reason for marriage, no individual who shouldn't have at least one STI, and every reason to not trust anyone you ever meet because all they want is to screw over the next person.

While written well it is a disgusting use of women to get jobs done. I'm sure that they are still being charge for the work that they do and the job probably stretches on and on.

If you want to read about the exact same thing over and over, this clown is it. There's never a plausible plot, decent grammar, or anything. Consistency is key. All crap all the time.

Great. Need more chapters.

I KNOW that I've read this somewhere before.

awful

"Mr." - "Mr." is a title, as a form of address it should be "mister."

No tags so I started to read the story. Nothing but a stupid fuck ass cuck glorification! With tags ora warning I wouldn' have read or rated this story with a 1 star rating.

Another bit of stupidity from an idiot who can't even figure out something as simple as tags.

Your story is awful, the characters are terrible, your descriptions of the sex are puerile, and the writing is atrocious. Beyond that? Pure gold...

Can't wait for the second chapter

I ha d friend whose wife ended up like this. She wasn’t very good looking but started working in a parlor. It wasn’t very long till the brothers found that my friend liked watching and coming over his house. She was passed around and stretched out so that he couldn’t even feel her anymore. He wasn’t strong enough and they took her and she works for them now.

Yep that’s what everybody wants a wife. Total slut and no loyalty to husband or family

WHAT A WASTE!!!!!

Wow! A new low of writing! Really, really, REALLY poor.

Both racist and generally offensive.

This gets a1 because you were able to marks on paper, otherwise it's crap. Who are these people? I'd say backwoods hillbillies, but that would give hillbillies a bad reputation.

Stupid!

Hey, yeah you, don't forget adding the guy at McDonalds. Very very important in relation to how the Taco Bell guy gets upset.

Reed! You’re going to hurt Assclown’s feelings. He’s emailed me to complain about my comments on his poorly written, ludicrous, racist, big black clown cuck stories. He actually believes that he has writing talent. This one sucks just like everything else he has written.

What is wrong with your mind?

WTF? This not just badly written, it simply stupid.

This definitely needs a second chapter

Is there any sense in this story? Did these people were hit by the martian ray of stupidity and sluttiness? Is there a multiverse for these people or the author?

the most stupid thing ever seen on literotica. rubbish at peak level