All Comments on 'The Optocynic 5000'

I always wished that the original story got a continuation but it never happened, so I'm really pleased & entertained by yours. Sure it differs from that one but not in a bad way, new author new approach & style. I do hope you continue your however.

This was hot in spite of it moving at a fast pace and it's brevity.

Sequel chapter (s) are a MUST!

I have just discovered your stories and now plan to read some or all of them.

That was VERY GOOD . Gave it a 5 . Made my favorite page .. Hope you do more with this . Sister? Sister, Mother . Maybe a hot three way ? Hell of a job Thank You .

I do think the addition of some kind of magical/mystical power was necessary to Optocynic's original series, but it was also fun that it was absent too. I'm glad you're continuing that series. Keep up the great work!

Original story by optocynic

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=686845&page=submissions

There were unfinished part 5 of the original story. I don't know if SirSinn plan to finish it. Maybe he join this new story with old one (orgy with Dan and his mom)???

There were more that 7 yrs from the original story were posted. I was expected that anybody could write continuation/spin offs... Thank you...

Sister next please then both.

Great story! Sister next, then mom and sister in a threeway

original story is the one of first storries i read on this site and hooked me to this site.good tribute to story.keep continue

I dont read big tits and big dicks stories but i made an exception for u

Except for the big cock and tits that so many think they need for a story also the anal ruined the whole thing

I always was cold towards the original when it essentially turned into a mom-a-slut-lets-gangbang her. This is a great story though, I just wished you had paced it a bit more. The anal could have waited to the next chapter probably. Oh well, 5 stars from me.

"Eeehhhhhhh,aaaarrrrrrgggg, aaaaaahhhhheee, eeeeerrrrrrggggg" etc. Not a bad story but it was too rushed and the anal at the end spoiled it.

Could use a little more detail

WOW - a wonderful story - Mom and hung son is so HOT !! The dialogue was pretty good but in the next chapter; can you let it flow with alittle more intimate conversation between Mom and son ?? Of course he really needs to screw her long and hard now that they have agreed this is not a one time thing. His comments have unlocked her real sexiness and how to fill the void of her getting sex. Thank you .......

I really liked the story, but you need to edit it a little better, there were places that didn't make sense, and you had to figure out what you meant!

Plagiarize much??? You tried to hide it but you plagiarized another story on here involving son,mom and a new camera.

You were trying too hard, and that "fuck you if you don't like it" at the start just ruined it from the beginning.

Perhaps realise that being LESS specific about things makes MUCH more people interested in your story.

This is a fantasy story website (kinda the point in the incest/taboo category), stop writing story to just suit yourself and write them to suit everyone.

If you're doing it for just you, then print it off your computer and jack off in your own bed and leave us to a fantasy.

Useless writer, useless story, huge waste of time, didn't even get me wet.

As there's too many to reply to here, I've copied them over to my blog (address in my contacts tab) and have answered them all -- even the negative one! -- over there.

What part of "This is very loosely connected to optocynic's series Persuading Shy Mom to Pose..." didn't you get?

excellent story. thanks.

"...that 'fuck you if you don't like it' at the start" is what we in the industry call a disclaimer. It's a warning to anyone who doesn't want to read a story about incest, big tits, or big dicks. But telling him to "stop writing story to just suit yourself and write them to suit everyone" is the worst advice you could ever offer to a writer. SirSinn's given us a great read BECAUSE he writes for himself first--as ALL good writers do. Congratulations on posting anonymous porn commentary that nonetheless manages to be surprisingly hateful, ignorant, and worthless.

Great to have caught another one of your stories! Quite enjoy them all.

As a amateur turned professional glamour photographer this story really struck a chord with me. It reminded me of my early, less confident, days...

I really enjoyed it and very much hope you do decide to do the much requested sequel with Bobby's sister.

And, fingers crossed, she'll have tits even bigger than their mother's! :-)

Thanks again.

Cant wait for sister fun...

thank you....

Very well written. If you're into this theme you should check out the "slut mommie" series

Loved this one, can't wait to read more.

5/5

Interesting story but the anal ruined the whole thing with her eating his cum

And very, very hot*****

Your stories are so hot

I like story mom and son have around house

The flow of reading your action packed story was perfect. How you moved with the shopping scene, then progressed with getting changed. That worked. Now I had better get on with the rest of your follow ups.

All I can come up with is "WOW!!!" That has to be one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Give me some fucking fantastic idea's for some of my own!!!! I see that there is more and can't wait to start reading!!!!

I think there should be more "eehhhh"s in the story.

How about another part involving Dan and his mom?

Keep them coming! I really love your writing.

Glad to see my stories inspired such good writing in you.

Keep up the good work...

Perhaps a meeting of the Moms would be 'eventful'??

Thank You!

I hope there will be much more to this story. Too hot to leave it here.

I don't know why this has a good rating. People obviously haven't read other similar stories to judge

I'm not gonna pretend the writing and plotting are super deep or anything, but I love the premise, and the descriptive text is great!

Not a bad story, but the premise about the camera is left floating out there without any real depth or explanation. Why is it magic? What is it about the photo capture that changes demeanor? I don't think it's needs a full explanation, but you kind of just left that detail back on the road behind you.

Another freakin awesome job!! Started running down your others and, despite your submission date, still shit hot. 5*

It went z little fast but was still a good story. Looking forward to reading the next part.

Loved it!!