by JukeboxEMCSA
You are a great author and this is one your best. I would love to be her.
Your writing is both eerie, and hypnotising. The entire tone is affective. I haven't looked at your other stuff yet, but if it's half as hypnotising as this one is, then I cannot wait for more.
What a lovely story. I've always enjoyed your work. It's so soft and affectionate. Poor, sweet Olivia. I like to imagine her captors have very sweet, if kinky, plans for her and she is going to live as a well-loved sub experiencing all sorts of softcore delights.
A lot of erotica is very angry, so it's always nice to see love/kindness in stories, and the hypnotist here is so gentle with Olivia, it's like she's being gently pushed and prodded deeper and deeper into a happy trance; as the pendulum promises ;) - Surrender is comfort. Surrender is peace. Surrender is pleasure.