All Comments on 'The Perfect Setup Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I don't care if the language is crude

Crude or not this man knows how to make a lady hot and I can tell you that it effected me just exactly that way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I fucking came three times reading this story

He may not be able to write or use grammer correctly but he sure knows how to make a woman cum. Fuck!! My pussy is dripping wet and my three fingers are sticky! Great start to another great white bitch in heat for black cock story can't wait for more. More black cocks fucking more white women!! Yea, soon every white woman will enjoy a black cock. Mummmmm what a turnon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
excellent build up

nice build up, looking forward to more

ISawYourMommyISawYourMommyabout 18 years ago
Dialogue

Try using more of it. I love the subject matter and the general theme of the story, but dialogue gives us insight into the people involved, and can also raise the nastiness of it all a few notches.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
so true

black men are much bigger than whites... its that simple

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'm Dripping

This was so good . I got so wet and had a screaming orgasm -my cunt is dripping

Joan @ The Jersey Shore

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlover 11 years ago
Beautiful

Hi, I am a married white mum in my early thirties - I agree that a married white woman's snatch is the best place for a naked thick black cock - especially teenage thick black cock - lovely story

Sarah, London England - leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Animal

Not a real man as they work hard and support their wives. This is just rutting racist dog, not fit for anything other then being a human dildo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You need an editor

Spell check doesn’t catch all mistakes. The author used loose for lose several times. You LOSE your husband. You loose the dogs of war. Your pussy is loose after you fuck a BBC and you’re a loser if you don’t know the difference.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Different story, same mistakes. Get a proof reader, anyone who knows how to spell will do. Don't be a loser or as you might write "don't be a looser'

OOAAOOAAalmost 2 years ago

Hot story!!! 🔥

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not bad not good just avarage and lot of grammar mistake but I enjoy this story

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