All Comments on 'The Pool'

I love this story. Your writing style is really fun and you're sexy as hell. Keep it up!

I loved your story it kept me in suspense all the way through it. The only thing that would have been a little better is to have more details about your body other than saying, "My 5' 6" frame had curves in all the right places."

Thank you for sharing,

RecHiker

Thanks Jenn, that was a sexy fun story. It reminded me of this young girl that came to the pool one night while I was stationed in San Antonio Texas. I had been swimming laps for a while and when I looked up there she was at the end of the pool topless. She said, she hoped I did not mind her tits. And I told her if she could show me something I had not seen before I would throw a rock at it. Cocky bastard that I was. And unfortunately that is when I also left, I had a girlfriend I was committed to and I was not sure she was legal to be honest so I just got out with a wink and left. She never came back for a repeat performance. But she had great tits.

Either you're really embracing this new you, or you're not as shy as you let on! Love both the stories. Sounds like you're having a lot of fun lately. Agree with the other reader, give a little more description of you - it sounds like you have a great body! Story had me really excited. I'm jealous of the lifeguard.

Great story! The build up was terrific. You have a nice pace to your stories and great endings!

Jenn, another very good story ! Cannot wait for your next....

Jenn,

A terrific story....amazing that the bikini held so well! Looking forward to your next one!

oh come on are you saying a sexy uninhibited young lady like yourself could not have figured out a way to get in past security. Bat thos lashes and show some leg I bet they'd say what the hell and let you return as often as you liked. Great story hon really enjoyed your naughty behavior hope to read more

Great story.

Jenn

WOW!!!!! One of the best stories I have ever read!!!! Very erotic very exciting!!!!

It was very easy to imagine you in the bikini!!!!! You made me wish I was lifeguard

You are a very good author!!!

Thanks

Jorge

Jenn - Another solid hit! I know you said in the beginning it was going to be short, but the end came way too soon. I'm going to be watching and waiting for your next suggestion like a starving man waiting for a full meal. Love your work!!

-- chimera.only

How old r u

Loved this story!! Very hot!

very hot and made me very hard. I wish more women were as confident as you. Thanks for the orgasm x

great story keep it up.