All Comments on 'The Pool Girl'

I love the premise and the fact that the main character is exploring her sexuality. My big thing though is that it was way too short to give it justice. I think you should be more detailed to bring out everything. Hope to read your next one soon.

Good start, but needs much more development, additional detail, it's too rushed as is...

I would like another story involving this lady. You could take this character in many directions.

Pretty well written. But like someone else mentioned, a bit rushed. A lot of directions this could go. More of the same or with imagination, new and exciting places. A little more of your biography would be nice also.

I started reading the oldest first, and can hardly wait to read them all!

Nesher

Read another story before seeing the story list and can't wait to read the next one. Agree it seemed rushed and needed more detail; hope to see this in the future stories.

Great story!

Then she went and proved he was right.

I would be too smsrt to have been recycled... I'd have stayed gone.

A whore will show her true self, always.

"Mrs. D" is a slut.