All Comments on 'The Predators'

I love a good female Detective erotica story here and there. This is shaping up to be a great one.

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If I'd gone to your stories list first I'd have realized this was just one episode of the story. Very good start, hope they nail the bastards. Looks like you've got enough work already to keep me busy till the next installments come out. Good job. BTW

Can't wait to read part two cause I really want to know how this one goes...

Please you are really good in what you do

Splendid idea. Would Love to learn what will Happen to Fay on her wa..

You've got me hooked, too. Great start! -- Five stars, JB Edwards

Here’s hoping it stays nice and dark.

Loved this do more and also I remember 2 other stories. One in Azerbaijan and one where a mother and 2 daughters are raped and sold in slavery I think. After this revisit those please.