All Comments on 'The Secluded Bench'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 6 years ago
loved it

A little stilted but overall extremely erotic and very very arousing.

rodryder44rodryder44about 6 years ago
Loving in-law

Terrific

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Really did not like the part when the husband became controlling about owning the house & dominating the two women. You’d never find a mother & daughter who would both be stupid enough to agree to an arrangement do one sided.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Abusive

2 stars. Abusive stories aren’t erotic. They are just abusive. Can’t say anything good about a story that started with so much promise, only to end as just another crap story written by an ass.

ccs29745ccs29745about 6 years ago
Not bad

Not a bad story. I could do without the abusiveness, but all in all a very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
u sick person

Not my cu[p of tea.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This is a seriously bipolar trio. Seems no love lost between them, just...

...overpowering sexual desire. How long until one or another goes catting about and brings in a fourth, unwelcome, participant? How long before wifey gets fed up being “baby” and tries dominating “mummy”? How long before they tie “hubby” up and leave him there while bringing in and pleasuring the local constable for several days? Or perhaps several members of the local rugby team? Really, why not?

While a fascinating fantasy at its roots, it seems a very unstable, volatile arrangment. It seems open ended in some potentially dangerous ways.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
started of good

what aload of rubbish 4 pagers could have wrote it in 2 pagers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago
Almost perfect

But this story is in serious need of some mother/daughter fisting. Especially with the mom fisting both of her daughter's holes at the same time.

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