All Comments on 'The Seduction of Lori Pt. 03'

by RyanTyler98

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beachbum5953beachbum5953almost 2 years ago

BRAVO… BRAVO… BRAVO…

Perfect set-up for the upcoming parts…. Terrific story line! Keep it going…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is becoming one of the better series of story’s I’ve read in a long time. Hopefully this finishes with a bang.

BrimorrBrimorralmost 2 years ago

Awesome story. Wish this would happen to my wife. So hot

BrimorrBrimorralmost 2 years ago

Awesome story. Exactly what I would love to see happen to my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love to hear her admit she couldn’t resist tasting it. Mentally shes hooked on big BBC and she knows what she wants.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story. However the stories are better when the husband doesn't know.

tomb72tomb72almost 2 years ago

Fantastic. I love the pace of your story and look forward to you continuing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good addition, however, the remainder will be better if she keeps her husband in the dark.

OOAAOOAAalmost 2 years ago

HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please go on soon 👍😉🔥

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Veery interesting--please keep going with the story and their inviting their friend to join them for dinner and more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Can’t wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh hell yes!!! Great story line so far. I sure hope this ends with a very well fucked white wife. Pregnancy risk would also be great. Best story I’ve seen in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another masterpiece! What a storyteller!! Can’t wait for part 4!

Pfj99Pfj99almost 2 years ago

This story is very hot. I can't wait for future episodes. I love the way you and Ryan give us a little more each time.

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

hot. Hope hubby knows what he is in for though

PervertedKnightPervertedKnightalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story, although I wish it had progressed a bit further. I look forward to another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome. Keep it exactly the way you have it. Husband and all. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice lil read here. Keep her baited with one on one messaging between the two without Duane knowing about any of it. Many opportunities for advancement here for sure, hospital encounters that end in a stairwell or car, exam room, behind applebees, ryans work secret room she finds after going with Duane and they don;t see him, bike trails where he destroys that bald kitty before Duane knows any more. Good job Sir

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love the stories so far buttt 1 page after waiting for another chapter was kinda disappointing

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story. It's time for Duane to watch Ryan stretch his wife's pussy, drive her wild and make her cum like mad, then flood her pussy with his black baby makers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Get Duane in a cock cage, and let him video Ryan's black meat filling her with his black seed while she's screaming his name.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story so far, hope we get more progression soon with the hubby being oblivious! Keep it going!

Amiable69Amiable69almost 2 years ago

Another great chapter! This story has so much potential once Lori has been laid - her girlfriends, Ryan's friends and so much more. Keep authoring! Amy x

bosco97bosco97almost 2 years ago

Amazing story with superb writing and believable development of characters and situations. I can't wait for parts 4, 5, 6, and 7 and any other chapters you'll grace us with. Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I hate cheaters & liars. I'm so glad she came clean & that the husband loved it. Good work, smoking hot.

gmach1gmach1almost 2 years ago

Great story would love it to be my wife. xx

Jennifer182Jennifer182over 1 year ago

Superb story, very well written. The reader can almost feel the torment Lori was struggling with 5 stars

jennifer

SlimyoneSlimyoneover 1 year ago

Great story, I wish it was my little wife Beth you were writing about 😍

MatureandkinkyMatureandkinkyover 1 year ago

Heating up nicely. Well written …..

2cruzin4bull2cruzin4bull2 months ago

She’s going to get fucked!,

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