All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is he missing his spine?

mrbaritone80mrbaritone80about 1 year ago

Great story definitely enjoying how this story moving

OpenWordsOpenWordsabout 1 year ago

Why do writers make protagonists so pathetic they become unsympathetic?

Horseman68Horseman68about 1 year ago

Note to the Mr. Machos: give the spineless comments a rest. He is nice guy who has never been with a woman — and still a kid.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

He is not a nice guy. He only thinks about what makes him feel better about himself. He thinks he is a nice guy, but running away when somebody cries is not good behavior. He runs away because he likes to feel bad about himself, a good guy would comfort the girl. He is just like his dad, the world revolves around them and their ideas, they just do not have the same ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

He just comes off as weak. She is your slave. You own her. Act like it.

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I'm new to writing and testing out some erotica novel writing on here. 21/03/24: Apologies for the delay. Sky Kingdom Chapter 24 has finally been submitted (24/03 small update - still waiting on Lit to publish but it hasn’t been rejected…yet) For those interested in chat, ...

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