All Comments on 'The Story of Billy Martin'

Dude,

Nicely Done!

Well thought out and executed. Keep up the good writing!!!

*****

ShrkDivr

Loved it and really find your writing style to be superb. You keep writin'em and i'll keep readin'em.

great, magmaman

...For some rather glaring typos. Stories come off of my typewriter typically from a first run through, then I allow them to "soak" for a couple of days, go back and try to fix my mistakes.

This one somehow I stuck in submit, when I went back early this morning to run it through again, while I was doing that it sort of got taken right out of my hands?

Sometimes when I get to rewriting I can make a mess, though.

I guess I was in there the same time staff was, and they grabbed it before I could screw it up!...LOL..

Thanks,

MGM

One of the most powerful stories I've read on this site.

is A better than B is better than C, An age old problem. Who is the best. TK U MLJ LV NV

But true love won in the end and the scum bag piece of shit got what he deserved.....

We can all tell what other people are like, deep down, for the most part. We can can tell in the first few minutes if someone is an asshole. So why do people associate with these people, become friends with them, invite them into their homes, knowing what they are like? People are easy to read, if you just look honestly at them without preconception.

This guy nearly got his wife raped and murdered, by over ruling his common sense. He always knew that Billy was a bully, and still hung out with him. His wife payed the price for his lack of moral fortitude.

It's all on Billy.

And it’s good to see a story where the bad guy gets exactly what he deserves. A .45 is a bit much for some inexperienced shooters. My wife prefers her.38 Special. I carry the 45.