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totostoryover 1 year agoThank you @YKN4949 , loving it, the idea/the world building/ the characters all are well written, just have three teensy tiny points: 1- dirty talk in the sex scenes because it felt like a silent movie. 2- short sentence/paragraph is better for reading than the long one unless it was necessary. 3- the story would be better if it was third person POV rather than 1st POV because reading the Mc`s thoughts all the time felt like a filler and somehow annoying.
Tjn25641over 2 years agoI love this story and will definately read the complete series. Very interesting and entertaining.
totostoryabout 3 years agoWell-writing , hoping more dialogue during sex scenes, I hope Sultanah fall in love man or women I don`t care , I want to see her in charge , I think till now she still discover her sex abilities. I am looking for what she is going to do when she trust her self more.
