All Comments on 'The Talent Scout'

Why is this couple married? I see no real love or companionship just two strangers that fuck other people who happen to be husband and wife.

just a sick old man.

By having the theme be a semi-revenge, semi-shake.up.Hubby sex-taping, JulyBear was able to include all manner of sexual variation in a (kinda) plausible fashion. Kudos for managing that! It was really packed in (pun totally intended!) I also liked including the agents rather than male porn stars with ludicrous dimensions (also cheaper!)

In a way, it was a little like watching four NFL games simultaneously with quad-split screen! Neat in concept, over-stimulating and eventually confusing and tiring in practice.

4*

Incidentally, 'mas difícil' = harder, as in more difficult

Better 'mas duro!' or 'mas fuerte!' (more force)

Good story, but you cut it too short by not providing a resolution scene between MIkki and Robert. Tie that up in a Part II page.

So far I enjoyed the story though I'm not quite sure if the story ended. Did it? or should I wait for a ch. 03?

I was going to give it three stars, as it just wasn't much of a turn on for me. I even considered two stars, with the ending consisting of anal abuse, and urinating on, and in, her. However .... after reading chapter two, the GANG RAPE story, I'm giving this one star. It really doesn't deserve more.

I've already picked several more of this author's stories to read ... I just hope they aren't as nauseatingly disgusting as chapter two of this story!

Whats that for? She makes a film about her cheating?? Wherefore!! To send it to her husband?? He gets the evidence of her betrayel for a good divorce !!! Bravo!! Think before you write!!! She is divorced asap and he is free for all the women out there!!!

My wife was devastated when she found out that I'd had an affair with one of her friends so much so that she deliberately set out to get me back by having sex with guys that I knew,I received a message from her while I was at work and it read see how you like it and there was a video attached to it, I went to my car and opened it, I recognised that the room was our bedroom then karla walked in and sat on our bed,you know these handsome men darling she said smiling and in came two naked guys and when they sat down beside her I realised they were my brother Mark and our friend Tony from the golf club! Enjoy karla said and undid her dressing gown so she was naked too! I've always wanted to fuck your brother babe feeling his cock and doing the same to Tony, she laughed as she sucked on their cocks and told my brother to fuck her, my wife was being spitroasted on camera, Tony had his turn before she took the both of them in her cunt and arsehole! See how it feels darling she said looking into the camera