by Daniellekitten
Holy crap Zorro , never leave a woman like that , nice continuation , more please.
Wow he’s an absolute arsehole, he wants to fuck her to get him out of his system but he’s not being careful about it at all.
Exceptional, the characters are very believable.
Tess (uk)
I like this very much, the period you have set the story in, it just feels right . Although I do agree with Tess he is an arsehole, if her family discover their "dalliance" he would be called out on it and expected to fight a duel, perhaps that would dampen his ardour.