All Comments on 'The Tinder Date'

You did have something going, but then the story just died. Not worth reading in its current form, but if you continue it to some other ending it could do better in voting.

This story was originally written to a girl that asked for a story ending with her being left alone in the forest. But I get your point.

Ditto re : the 10/13/. Comments. Re-write the concluding narrative so you either have an ending or a clear transition statement leading into Tinder #2. I xK