All Comments on 'The Turning Point'

Build on what you wrote and keep going.

To be continued like really your story should get a zero but no option for that

For the beginning of a story that could go along ways, I thought it was well written and can't wait for the next chapter or chapters to continue. I may not be a writer and will never be but keep on writing.

The contraction of 'you are' is you're!

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

So you broke up with the hot/smart/Nice girl you dated for 3 years cause your mom saw you getting the pipes cleaned???

I agree with another comment that the guy dumped a hot cheerleader he had dated after 3 years that just gave him his first blow job? Seriously did you just need to put that in there to add lines to an already short ass story? Well got one star and won't even bother with the next part. Garbage

Loving it!