All Comments on 'The Twins' Birthday'

What a hot story! I love reading how your nervousness just slowly went away over the night. I came really hard reading this one!

I'm excited to hear more!

Loved the story and am eager to read the next edition.

I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to hear what happened next!

I know exactly how you felt, being of the same mind (pre wine and Wendy!) My man has introduced me to the joys of exhibitionism and although I haven't yet plucked up the courage to go as far as you, I know I will one day!

Thank you for an excellent story. Well written! I loved it. Keep up the good work!

Excellent progression, great emotion, not to mention the fucking.

That word gets used a lot, but despite my tendency toward verbosity, I'm at a loss for a more appropriate one - WOW!!! A truly superb work by a truly superb author. You had me inside your mind, experiencing the excitement with you. Well done, Georgie!

You wanted to know and the answer is "more." Your writing is excellent and well-paced and arousing and we thank you for contributing. I also love it that your spelling and punctuation are excellent. Personally, I would love to see more detail in your sex description and perhaps a little more length. What happened during "The next hour" that taught her so much?

Very well written. Hope there is more to this tale.

Do not Tease us

About to read the next chapter. excited and very hard thinking about it.

More PLEASE!!!

It was Awesome and I hope you write some more. It would be epic if you did anal ass well.

More more more

Mmm Please tell me more! My hard cock is pulsing and sooo hard. I want to know what happened when Tim and Wendy came in your room. Did you kiss Wendy?

1) that the lights had been turned out and Dave and Tim PURPOSELY switched WIVES...they are identical twins and each had wanted a "one time" fuck of the others wife

2) lights were turned out and by ACCIDENT Dave and Tim climbed on the wrong wife. They were all drunk and did not realize the error before they had each fucked the others wife. Afterwards they realized the error. Now...how do you want to handle the mistake? Will they switch more often?

Was hoping to see more or a chapter 2 but no such luck. A well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.