All Comments on 'The Video Shoot Ch. 04'

Great story

Came several times with this story! More please !!!!

Looks like you've reposted Ch. 03, here.

Read all 4 chapters and enjoyed them sooo much.

Please don't stop writing, I love the way you leave so much for my imagination and don't paint a picture that's over the top. ( ie. You don't mention 12" cocks, or huge breasts.) Your story allows me to imagine myself in the picture.

This series of chapters are amongst the best story I have read.

Please don't stop writing. Pretty please 😈😈😈.

Loving the slow emotional development combined with the hot setting!! Please keep adding more chapters.

CassieK, ill be your brother ;)

Comes in colors everywhere. The narrator really isn't meant for her. She's a trailblazer , he's a follower. Very well told- I love that her character is still unfolding as sex goes on. Usually authors fosake one for the other. I thank Tsquare foe sharing these two and their world.