All Comments on 'The Villa Pt. 04'

by BaronVonHappyPants

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
thank you

it's been a long wait, but what a great surprise, thanks so much for another very hot part, I wonder what tomorrow will bring?

homerjayhomerjayalmost 5 years ago
thank you

i'm begging you, please don't make us wait so long this time. we are so close and so is the son.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 5 years ago

Now that the storyline is moving so fast, I can't wait until chapter five. Five stars and a favorite point!

slightlyeroticgwcslightlyeroticgwcalmost 5 years ago
loving this story

I love the way the story has unfolded. You've kept it interesting and moving along nicely. I love that it's believable. You didn't make him an overly hung stud that makes her cum with a single touch. And the mom is hot but not over the top. Can't wait for him to go the rest of the way with her

dommasterjimdommasterjimalmost 5 years ago
DAYummmmmm !!

SMOKIN. HOTTNeed TTT,,!!!

NOW we Chapter 5... LOVE to read where this Adventure goes NEXT,,!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
outstanding

as with the other comments, I've loved the way that you've developed this story, making it so easy to visualise the erotic scenes, with great realistic dialogue too, just wonderful, PLEASE PLEASE give us the next part asap, thanks

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 4 years ago
^__^

Great story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work! ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Worked for me!

This series was very erotic and fun to read. Like some earlier commenters said, it was not too over the top. Good pace, believable. Well written, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Need ch. 5 and more

Smokin hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Marvelous story, well told. My fave incest fantasy - mum and son with Dad's enthusiastic approval.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Texzilla58Texzilla5812 months ago

The whole series is so hot but we need more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I love how steve ois turned on by his big titted mother never imagining how is father and mother planned out the whole affair.

a real turnon how steve checks out him mom's big titted hot bod.

how he surreptitiously feels up his mother and especially her big tits as she applies the sun tan lotion.

do you think the affair will continue once they get back to the UK??

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