by BaronVonHappyPants
it's been a long wait, but what a great surprise, thanks so much for another very hot part, I wonder what tomorrow will bring?
i'm begging you, please don't make us wait so long this time. we are so close and so is the son.
Now that the storyline is moving so fast, I can't wait until chapter five. Five stars and a favorite point!
I love the way the story has unfolded. You've kept it interesting and moving along nicely. I love that it's believable. You didn't make him an overly hung stud that makes her cum with a single touch. And the mom is hot but not over the top. Can't wait for him to go the rest of the way with her
SMOKIN. HOTTNeed TTT,,!!!
NOW we Chapter 5... LOVE to read where this Adventure goes NEXT,,!!
as with the other comments, I've loved the way that you've developed this story, making it so easy to visualise the erotic scenes, with great realistic dialogue too, just wonderful, PLEASE PLEASE give us the next part asap, thanks
Great story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work! ^__^
This series was very erotic and fun to read. Like some earlier commenters said, it was not too over the top. Good pace, believable. Well written, too.
Marvelous story, well told. My fave incest fantasy - mum and son with Dad's enthusiastic approval.
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
I love how steve ois turned on by his big titted mother never imagining how is father and mother planned out the whole affair.
a real turnon how steve checks out him mom's big titted hot bod.
how he surreptitiously feels up his mother and especially her big tits as she applies the sun tan lotion.
do you think the affair will continue once they get back to the UK??