by TheDarkCloud
and the writer, too. She willingly and consciously degrades herself in support of her family; he allows his most base and disgusting animalistic behavior free rein.
I'm all for treating a partner roughly, IF SHE CONSENTS TO IT. I abhor a man who treats a woman the way the young woman was treated in the story. And, then the cheap SOB leaves her a pound as payment. What a schmuck!
The male protagonist was disgusting; the young woman was pitiful. Once again, another male of the species treats another woman with despicable and reptilian ugliness.
I hope the people who enjoy such a story as this one are zero after counting the author, although I'm sorry to say the number is larger. Makes me sad for the male of the human species.
And, I don't care if it's "only a story." Words matter!
Are you sure you know its just a story North Bay? If you don't like it just don't read it son.
Fuck! My neighbor makes me hard just thinking about her let alone fucking her face!
She just turned 19....Guess I'll keep hoping!
When you said that "women should be treated like shit and they are" it kinda just turned me off the story. I was getting into it and then I was just cold. :/ may sound stupid to many but that's how it is for me.
Some lucky bastard ... wish I had a similar neighborhood girl ... but is bad karma risk worth the fun?
And there you have it, whores! ALL women need a pimp - who else is gonna protect you from asshole predators like this cheap faggot?!?!
Well ,he was a real prick……if I was her id do something really nasty to him