All Comments on 'The Window Washer'

by nikki_2021

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Zenful_IntentionsZenful_Intentionsover 3 years ago
Very very nice...

Great build-up...great images. You're really good with description, both what they're doing and what your pov character is thinking. Love your stuff!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

Bit of fun. Shame he's married!

SimonBrookeSimonBrookeover 3 years ago

Excellently told. Not the ending I expected!

Lic2pleaseLic2pleaseover 3 years ago
Naughty Nikki

Hee Hee I know her pain, been there and didn't get to either.....

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kiss kiss lic lic

Trekkie469Trekkie469over 3 years ago
Great Story!

I love the story and wished that I was the window washer. The exception in my case was that the window I had to clean was my computer monitor. Twice before I could finish reading your story. Thank you.

StiffinKentStiffinKentover 3 years ago
Wow

Very well told. I’m happy I read it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Maybe have him come back for a third washing where she surreptitiously records everything?

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...