by conanthe
I really enjoy this work, It has a way of stimulating thought! By all means, PLEASE CONTINUE!
You need to proofread your work. after spell and grammer check, save it and get away from it for ~24Hrs. Then just read it again and I'm sure you'll pick up on many of the errors that spell checking tends to miss.
I've ginen each chapter of this a "5" and will continue to do so with continued content like you have posted. Getting rid of the glitches will just make it a more captivating read. THANKS!
When will their be more chapters?
Found this to be well thought out and an interesting read.
Want more :).
Fantastic story, I am really enjoying it the same way I enjoy reading My Only Talent. I only wish you would finish them.
I rated all 5 stories in this series at 5 stars!!! My only worry and request.........please complete the story and don't let us hanging for too long as it causes disasspointment if we do not a continuity soon.!!!
So now the next chapter can be born. A great sequence of a story PLEASE continue. Don't leaves us hanging like this!!
TKU
Please, please, please ...
I beg you ...
Do not leave us hanging ...
This story deserves to be continued for many more instalments. This has the makings of another epic series
Why stop? Completely enthralling.. I hope that after reading all the comments that you will be enthused and driven to continue and complete this story... SOON!
I'm 64 and even though I don't like the homosexual stuff I would read more.
The basic story line is good.
I am old enough to see the utopia that is the 'world' background.
I like the main character and mostly connect with him.
BTW I object to the premise that 80% of men would have same sex relations if the were not trained by society to avoid it.
I would say more, but you don't want to hear it.
Do you have any plans to continue the series? It's been a great read so far!!!
One of the best series I have read on this site! I want there to be more but are there plans for more?
like some others I definitely would like more, however, I also want more of "My Only Talent". Only so many hours in a day!
I enjoy your writing style and obviously you are very well educated.
Really like your stories, and hope you will finish this older one someday.
Even the author got tired of it. Can't blame him. What drivel.
Looks like some of the previous readers were not expecting the non-heterosexual content of this series which is a shame, as I'm sure many of us would like some more chapters.
Really enjoyed the series up to this point. Not sure why some can't wrap their minds around the experimentation and acceptance but that is their issue. Hope you come back with more for this as well as my only talent because they both rock. Thank for your time.
I'm respectively asking CAN YOU FINISH THIS STORY I want to know what happens NEXT.
It's a shame you have not finished this series ,it has been a fantastic read .
have enjoyed the series ladies in blue and would really like you to continue you've only revved our engines thoughly enjoy series my only talent and am extremely happy you are continuing it. has so much to offer. keep them coming please
I only gave it 4 stars because it’s not finished.. please do complete the story as we need to know the ending.
I very much enjoyed your talent series, but found this one even better. Thank you so much!
VERY ENJOYABE SERIES BUT IT SEEMS TO HAVE COME TO AN ABRUPT END. WHAT HAPPENED
I stopped reading this shit in installment one when I discovered the characters were fossils.