All Comments on 'The Wrong Room Ch. 06'

Keep on writing this story. It's a really good one and it shows how when two people meant for each other end up together. I do have a suggestion try and make them longer if you can.

PLEASE KEEP GOING, BUT A LITTLE LONGER, SURE WOULD BE GREAT TOO...! BETTY jo xoxo

So that I could give this story the 5 *'s it deserves. Thanks.

Some of you have expressed dismay at not having the voting option. I purposely chose to do that because 1) I found the voting system arbitrary and, 2) probably more importantly, some used it for what i considered spiteful reasons.

I apologize if that decision upset you.

Secondly, this short form was a choice i made at the beginning of the series, to explore a quick or flash fiction style. I'd not written in that stylre before so i decided to explore it with this story series.

On a side note, from a purist POV, flash fiction is usually under 1000 words. Oh well.

Chapter 7 is forthcoming...including a bonding between Marissa and Allison...of sorts...things are often tenuous with girls...I'm going to get in trouble for that...

dreamweaver594

Extremely addictive story. Very well written with a sly sense of humor. nothing mechanical about the sex or the love. Got me wet.

xoxo,

Di

Loved this series and awaiting more. You created another beautiful romantic story.

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