All Comments on 'Therapy at the Shack'

please, write something longer, more emotional, romantic story about mother and son. Put some drama you know?

1. You are a decent writer, much better than some, not as good as others. Keep up the work, you get better as you go.

2. Part of these tales that make them so exciting is the illicit nature, the taboo of doing a relative, the fear of being caught. You give us none of this. Take your time, try to flesh it out a bit more. Just my $.02.

one of best good quik story I've read

a nice little tale of lust and love....would have preferred that Paulas son got her pregnant and not the other one as that means he has two kids...next time it should be the other son gets them both pregnant...vice is nice but incest is best....

another repeat of the shack theme...