All Comments on 'Things that Go "Ohhh" in the Night'

Though your story is half-decent, I've read much better recent

You need to work on grammar, your lines they seem to stammer

Don't get me started on the spelling, I can't imagine what you're selling,

Next time get someone to edit, someone you know who's really read it.

Very hot story, they should continue until they go back to school at least so 2 or 3 more chapters would be nice

I loved the story. I masterbated as I read it remembering my own time

Very erotic and humorous.

Good story. I only saw one thing that proofreading again would have caught.

Thanks!

A very erotic read. An awesome story. I materbated while I read it. Keep writing !!!

Perfect story kept me intrigued right to the end loved it can't wait to see more

Very erotic and to read about two sisters getting intimate with each other was hot.

This is an awesome story.

Well paced, passionate, sweet and sexy.

And I just love how you take time to describe the physical action as well as how they react to it.

All day can say is, WOW!

I've read a lot of these stories and a lot of the time they're poorly written and rushed. I loved the build up and the way you described the sex scenes and I loved the pieces of humour and references, made the main character feel like a real person. Keep it up

Meant to put 5 stars! Funny and clever as well as erotic

Yup...Thanks!

Such a great story with the right amount of detail to visualize the complete story in my head. Please consider continuing the story. The sisters have to live together and continue their love making adventure! Such great story telling.

Great story well written I hope you want to write more stories love reading them

Was nice love story fingers in me whole time

... had me pulling on my pecker and making a sweet mess with what came out.

I am so wet! I loved this story. I'm an avid literotica user and I can tell you that this story is in my top three. Thank you for the story and the multiple orgasms!!

Hope there is a chapter 2 and 3 and 4 and .....

arousing, loving, naughty

So not arousing is he gay he sounds like it enjoying his ass whole licked on gay guys would like that

@Mfkndragons, are you seriously a troll on an erotica website? Like where is your life at? That's so embarrassing.

... on the anus than anywhere else in the human body.

Do yourself a favor, find a sweetie with a really nice ass and give it a try.

Of course work on her pussy at the same time.

Clit, G-Spot and Anus altogether, she'll really go off.

And love you for it.

Other than that, why are you even here?

Hot and sweet. I especially liked the silence of the lambs reference

Really nice story the way I like… would need more chapters here… love your style

1st half was kind of annoying. Tried to hard with the jokes in my opinion.