All Comments on 'Thorny Vines'

There was the germ of a good idea here but I’m afraid it was spoiled for me by so many spelling and grammatical errors that made reading it bit disappointing.

Enjoyed it

awesome cheeky sex

A good premise (though not very original) but it was clumsily executed. Think about getting an editor.

As another commenter said, the spelling and grammatical errors distracted from gaining full enjoyment.

Get an editor, then a "5" will be more likely than a "4."

Nice imaginative, pretty hot story, but PLEASE ... Get someone to edit your next story because I agree, the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are bad enough to be really distracting. Don't let that discourage you ... just FIX IT!

Go read the NY Times if you want perfect writing, this is a porn site

Hope sister shares another pleasure trip with loving brother.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Not bad, but get your terminology straight....tokes, not blows.

...writes the fucktard who can't read.

Keep your expectations low. Aim for mediocre. Like the dipshit who anonymously wrote that comment.

As already said, you need an editor. This story has very good potential. I will watch for a follow up. Keep the chin up and do not become discouraged.

What a considerate brother. Nice writing, a very good story.