by Goldeniangel
This story got my cock hard.Ilike watcching my wife getting fucked while I watch also.
Your story was mentioned on the New Story Review Thread on the Author's Forum of Lit. ~ Thanks Red
Now that is surely an improvement. He went from wimp cock/wife watcher to pimp scheduler, to gay asshole fucker but with an option to be humiliated and pathetic as the writer wishes. Pretty sick & not arousing except for the few sicko's who need male humiliation.
Is a contest worth the respect & self respect(perhaps) lost here - kinda like you are what you eat or write to a degree.
Wasted talent to most but good luck surviving.
Pure shit from someone who obviously does not know much about fucking.
SOME of you people don't know a great story when you read one, Keep up the good work, Fire
I liked the story but it was lacking some plot development and detail.
Some people do know a good story when they see one. This ain't a good one.