All Comments on 'Tinkle Bell Ch. 06'

by Many Feathers

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 14 years ago
It keeps getting better

Like a Lay's potato chip, I tried Chapter 1. Then I couldn't resist, so I read Chapter 2. Well, here I am at Chapter 5, still eager to find out what happens to our boy and Bella. No doubt he will be up to his ears in whatever he's eating. Looking forward to Chapter 6.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 13 years ago
Oops!

The chapters flowed so smoothly that I only now realized that I had already read Chapter 6, and now Chapter 7 has been posted. I must have been distracted by all the erotic action and failed to track the chapters I'd read. Feathers, I must hand it to you--you're good.

Starkeeper713Starkeeper713over 4 years ago
Red Wings

This has been an interesting story so far even with the piss play "which I'm not a big fan of " but when you opened up that door of being on her period that was just gross, a lot of the story I've really enjoyed but this has went way to far for me. Just stick to a good story line without pushing it to far.

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