All Comments on 'To Fuck My Own Daughter'

That story was FN HOT and almost perfect. There was just one thing that seems like an oops. You tell how her father takes off her shorts but later he reaches up into her skirt; so she is wearing shorts and a skirt?

Other than that the story was awesome! 4-stars. 5 if it wasn't for that one oops.

At least the love making was tender.

Hope she doesn't get pregnant

but thought it went a little too fast, didn't even get her fully naked and play with her tits or eat her pussy just finger and fuck her, could have gotten her off eating her out first that would have driven her crazy.

He wrote shirt, get your eyes tested.

A little too juvenile for my liking, he calls an 18 year old "baby girl" and calls himself "daddy". Most of the dialogue is unreal and made it just another schoolboy wanking story.

Why is the door always cracked when someone is jacking off or fingering their self?

So hot. Love the gentle way he focused on her clit and made her squirm. Great build up. ~sigh~ Such a good daddy...

Please continue it!

that was soooo good!!!

If she doesn't get knocked up, this was a waste.

There aren't enough stories with daddies who are gentle and sweet with their daughters. Thanks for this one!

Made my pussy swell and reminds me of my boyfriend who calls himself daddy while we fuck and gets so hard when I’m moaning ohh Daddy to him. Suck on that pussy next time while fingering her ass

This needs a part 2 please. I'm so wet and wishing I had a "daddy" like him. He was so sweet and gentle with her. Please ignore the ones wanting her to get pregnant. She's just 18 plenty of time for that later.

The ~ is what made it for me! Using the Tilde in that way actually makes it better.

5 stars, for the "sounds" of ecstasy!

You are talented .. keep going 👌

Beautiful writing! I love all the gentleness and caring. There aren't enough stories like this out there. Too much rape and violence. No love or respect.

I'd love to read more on this couple. I'll check out the rest of your stories for sure. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Stay safe!

- AijD

I really enjoyed the fact that you incorporated the father speaking during the sex. I don’t see too many stories that feature the male talking dirty and I am glad you do. FYI, using phrases like “good girl” and “almost there”…HOT! Will definitely check out your other stories!

Good job. Thanks for sharing it 👍.

Thanks for not making her a slut, not letting him call her such. Loved the respect.

Good story, only comment is that the ending feels rushed. Daddy would help her clean up.

Did he wash his hands is my question

I liked it, except for one thing. Eden was a virgin. There was no way that he could have broken her cherry, without hurting her. All girls first time is a traumatic experience and Eden's is no exception

I would have loved to read about her reaction was when her father put his cock inside of her cunt and broke her cherry. It would have added a lot of your story

Otherwise, it was a good story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading about Eden possibly getting pregnant

Eden needed some rough...pull her hair😅😅😅she ain't supposed to be shy anymore

Love your writing! Would love to see more daddy/daughter stories!

Very well written. I loved it. Two amall considerations: Daughter was a virgin, and there was no way she could not had suffer at least a little in her first sexual experiencias. Second, being a considereg father he should have taken precautions as the first time she can get pregnant as well as any other time.

Loved reading this story, great writing! Fucking hot, definitely got my pussy nice and wet! Only thing that would have made it that much better would be if Daddy drove Eden even more wild by eating her juicy sweet pussy!

I really enjoyed this story - great writing! F*ckin hott!! Definitely got my pussy nice and wet reading it! I think the one thing that would make the story just that much better would be for Daddy to drive Eden wild by eating her juicy sweet little cunt!!

That was an fucking great story!!!! Got me all hot and wet. This was so good I hope there's more to come.

Weird

She is lying on her stomach and your balls slap against her ass??

I have experienced this. It is so good.

Loved this!

I want to try with my own daughter…

That was hot!

Need more Gwen and Clay!!!

Hot af!! Want more of these two!

So very very hot!

Good story but I would have loved to be able to read a lot more about their relationship.

This is what I’ve been looking for, but i think its quite rush during the fuckng session. I was hoping it would take days for Clay to take her daughter, like a slow seduction including touching and sucking her breast. Hoping for more! Pls write also naive characters