All Comments on 'Troubled Waters: The Second Day'

But I'm antsy about what's going to happen to the rest of the girls. Not a fan of snuff at all. Also, the name Lorelei rings alarm bells in my brain. (Die Lorelei, and the mythos behind it)

i'd like to see permenant brother sister pairing after cruise. sister as submissive partner?

... but I agree with Keairan that the apparent snuff aspect is disturbing. In that regard, I'm hoping Desiree turns up with the Coast Guard to save the day in the final installment. On other points: I really enjoyed the comic relief with the bully getting his just desserts (so to speak), and Irena's revelation of her secret (and her subsequent reward to our hero) was a stroke of genius. The consummation of the brother/sister love was believable and hot, even though in real life I'd still struggle with the concept. Ain't fantasy grand?

I think your story is great... Just keep writing like you are =]

You my friend have an unreal imagination, I hope you know that. The tension is making me ill. I would like if Desiree turns up with the Coast Guard as Average Bear said in his comment. Although that would reduce the very dangerous situation they are in. I still like a happy ending....If the git thompson dies I have no quams....But I love Lori to be unharmed and maybe develop a continuing relationship with Alex....LIKE I SAID, HAPPY ENDING

As with some of the others, the snuff aspect is unsettling, but this is supposed to be fiction and it adds a very exciting and dangerous element to the story. For those of us who are taboo addicts, this story is very hot to say the least. Maybe I'm warped, but I'm enjoying the hell out of it.

like, i know this is a sex story and that's why i was reading it. but your stuff is interesting enough to just read as regular entertainment. you're awesome. i hope you keep at it. thanks!

Hm!

The old fart.

Happy they finally made love to each other and hope it continues as they stay together.