by BlueSkiesRedEyes
one of the best stories I've read. it was fun and exciting . more please lol..
I love the romantic flair you wove into his encounter with each of them, especially Gina. Would like to read more about their unfolding relationship and group interactions.
This is not usually my thing. But the story is well written and exciting. I must say I loved it. But I really wanted Tyler to take it instead of Chris.
I enjoyed this a lot. The mix of personalities was fun and very sexy. I'd encourage you to write more in this genre.
This wasn't that good. I think this story would've worked out way, way better if you only used 1 MC, not 2.
I really enjoyed the story, but I wish towards the end they could’ve talked about only being a top. I mean he should be able to fuck her every once in a while.
Nothing against this story, but I've come across so many others of the same theme . Rarely do I find a story of this genre that doesn't include either an assertive, or often, plain aggressive futa, hypercompliant "virgin" male, and an utterance of the "good boy" in his reference.
Otherwise, this is well written, mostly error free and a good length.