by m_storyman_x
This is, amusingly cute. I think I see how this story is going. If it does go that way, I really like it.
Reading the first page I thought you were writing about my wife. Great Job, keep it going.
Wasn’t so happy with the sharing. I do not believe either of them would do that in front of a third party. That was out of character got them and in the story somewhat forced.
Scores 3/5