All Comments on 'Twelve Days of Christmas - Day 03'

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prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 2 years ago

This is, amusingly cute. I think I see how this story is going. If it does go that way, I really like it.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 years ago

Cute interlude. I liked it

Cheers

SAGE

FillDirtWantedFillDirtWantedabout 2 years ago

Reading the first page I thought you were writing about my wife. Great Job, keep it going.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Wasn’t so happy with the sharing. I do not believe either of them would do that in front of a third party. That was out of character got them and in the story somewhat forced.

Scores 3/5

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