All Comments on 'Twelve Days of Christmas - Day 04'

There is no denying m_storyman_x's talent as a writer, and Twelve Days of Christmas is more proof of it. Chapter 4 in this story is very well done, but would have been better if it had been longer. Even so, a rating of Five Stars cannot be denied, at least from this reviewer.

Hot little story!

Cheers

SAGE

Deja vie is this a resubmittal? Feels like I just finished reading this. The parking lot and the garage scene seemed like I had read them before.

Another fine chapter.

Thank you for the story, Storyman!

To me she is playing some serious mind games on her husband. Its like she's playing a long game (ok, 12 days leading up to Christmas), manipulating him into circumstances that she would like to have. Makes me wondering, why don't you just tell him what you want?

(big grin) There were a couple grammar errors, but it received a 4.

This is the third day now. What will day four bring? I do like this series, very imaginative. I have already imagined some things.

I am still a little confused about the couple being sex addicted kids in prelude: then 50 somethings no sex adults until challenged and now playing same type games as them as the young adults.

That was sooo hot!!!

5/5