All Comments on 'Twin Times Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Thank you

Great story keep them cumin, and I do know that a sister is always the best

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Deja vue

I always wanted to do the same routine with one of my sisters but never got past peeking at her taking a bath .

Thanks, you made it come true in a strange way .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep the story going

enjoyed it very much. keep the story going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
fan

great story continue it

Lloyd2004Lloyd2004over 16 years ago
Great Story

Loved the story, I am sure it is true "Sisters are Best"

Lloyd

jackreddjackreddalmost 15 years ago
Good

A little more lead up might have been nice. Your style is great though, and I don't often say that about first person narratives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Good story...very well stated. The ending with asking us if you should go on was a bit silly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
twin times..

Very good.....keep going with this story...!

irishmike73irishmike73almost 8 years ago
Contradiction

It's hard to believe someone who says they love you when they follow it up with calling you a filthy bitch. It was so out of place with everything else that it nearly ruined the story for me.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyalmost 8 years agoAuthor
to irishmike

while i appreciate your opinion, i did put a qualifier in there post-comment:

'Fucking you, you filthy bitch,' I swore, the overpowering desire I felt causing me to use base language towards her.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Yes..please go on,,,as if we didn't know what the secret was

Lovely story

Tender and sweet.

Surprised they went to different schools.

Also, what about Christmas break. Didn't they get together?

Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please write more!

This was fucking hot. I liked this a lot. Please continue this story line

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fair warning to the people who wants to proceed to the next chapter.

Stop here and do not read the rest if you do not want to see the sibling love here turn into ashes. Because next up will be the Aunt forcing herself on her nephew until nephew forgot he loves his twin too, and then by the third chapter nephew continues to lie to his sister that he's been fucking his aunt and then family orgy will unfold. So stop here if you only came for the nice and intimate sibling story, or do continue if intergenerational sex is your cup of tea.

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