- Incest/Taboo
- Twin Times Ch. 03
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All Comments on 'Twin Times Ch. 03'
by geronimo_appleby
- 25 Comments
Anonymousabout 19 years agoGreat story keep it going.I wish I could write a story like it.Heck! I wish I was in the story
John
Anonymousalmost 17 years agothis story was soo fuckin hot that it have me feeling up my self
BrettJalmost 17 years agoHiya Geronimo - just finished all 3 Chapters of this story [ had it downloaded but hadn't got to it yet ]. Why so long to write more? It cries out for continuation, if "Marjorie" can't do it, you should go off in a direction that pleases you. Thanks for an erotic read!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoit started out ok but you ruined it when the aunt forced herself on him you could have handled it much better instead of destoying your story
oldwaynealmost 14 years agoIt was more intimate when it was bro/sis in love. Now it has kind of become an incestuous orgy, I guess. Perhaps more would be fine, we will see, won't we?
Anonymousover 12 years agoNow you're just mixing in too many combinations. It was okay as a bro/sis story in ch 01 but now it goes full on orgy. No thanks.
PolyLvrabout 12 years agoAlthough I would have oreferred it to be just the two, it's developing nicely. Have you written more yet?
Aurimazover 8 years agoI wonder why every author feel the need to begin their incest stories with simple love between two siblings, and then turns everything into nasty all-family orgy... If you're starting with love between two siblings, finish in the same manner. Love between twins is not the same as love between father and daughter. It's like different realms and you can't effectively mix those two. I really like first chapter. Second and third ruined everything.
Anonymousover 7 years agoof the 3 chapters !
was just a touch unbelievable
Why would they be worried about the sisters/daughter reaction to dad aunt fucking ?
she is fucking her twin brother
and her reaction when they got caught watching made very little sense oh and didn't take her to long to get over it and start sucking fucking her dad
Anonymousover 7 years agoI agree largely with Aurimaz. The first chapter was lovely---tender young love between two attractive siblings. Things went downhill rapidly from there. Sorry, but intergenerational incest is no longer sexy; just disgusting. (Father/daughter, mother/son, aunt/nephew, uncle/niece, grandparent/grandchild . . . ugggh!) Even intergenerational sex (young man/much older woman, or vice versa) is a real turn-off. Geriatric sex is just not exciting. (Yes, I worked in a mental hospital and have seen too much.) If this is the best you can do, go try something constructive. Incest is not your best suit. 1* is too high.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoWhile I agree that the second two chapters killed the story I do not think it is because of the inter-generational nature. Love with a twenty or thirty year age gap is not uncommon so father/ daughter and mother(aunt)/ son match-ups are not automatically abhorrent to me.
What killed it for me is that despite numerous claims that each pair of sibling truly love each other:
"You and dad are just like Lindy and me. I love my sister, and you love dad. Isn't that right?"
They are then more than willing to all fuck each other, raw and animalistic with little regard to love between the older and younger members.
Completely destroyed the feeling you created in the first chapter.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe aunt coming into the picture was a huge turn off for me. Why ruin a good sibling story you created in the beginning by adding her into the mix? Everything you built up so nicely in the first chapter was completely destroyed and its a shame, really, you had a good one there but you messed it up by the second chapter. You would do us a favor if you stop adding chapters though.
magic10fingers4about 4 years agoWhat a celebration - so raw and festive! Pure joy! My cock's oozing!
dikupinyaover 3 years agotoo bad you ruined the story.
Jerrymazalmost 2 years agoYES MORE! The story was a bit long winded but good! Having had my older sister take my virginity ! Wile her husband was in Vietnam for 18 months I can relate. I was 15 and babysitting for her. She was drunk and horny her and her friend Rosie had there way, I got my first 2 blowjobs and 2 pieces of ass that night . All I can say is wow!
Mayan112 months agoBeautifully written, well done and can't wait for the next continuation of the twins and dad aunt's next adventure. Kudos
Divway11 months agoWow. the build-up to the four of them meeting was so good. Captivating and had me reading them all without pause. I think if it continues like this that Belinda is the most likely to get pregnant with twins maybe....!
Loved it and your other works Geronimo. Thanks for your creative enterprises. They have been a delight t read. All 5's as far as I am concerned. Please keep it going.
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