All Comments on 'Twins Galore'

If this isn't a Ch. 1, no fair leaving the youngest twins out. Write the scene(s), or write them out of the story altogether.

but started with story about the house asking everyone if they wanted in,But already done deal(no explanation of WTF happened with the broker to get good deal on house)& why the need to ask if siblings want in ?

This was really good, but will there be a sequel or second chapter to this?

This story has a lot of potential, would love to see more.

Enjoyable story. But, I am interested in where it will be going. Since it was written so far back, I don't think it will go anywhere.