All Comments on 'Two Captives'

I think this is a great stroy so far, and i await with baited breath for more, with the scope of possible stories it could turn into an Epic Tale, i would like a little more detail, ie, the teepee's, whats in them etc, and the people, but that is just me, i realy did enjoy reading it, thank you for your story... Den

Great. Four pages of nothing but blowjobs. Let me guess; this was written by a guy? Not trying too hard to turn on the female readers, are you?

Read a lot about sex - but enjoyed this relating of pioneers living on the frontier enduring the perils and dangers. Interesting detail about the Indians and their way of life. Writer does some very nice descriptions of the era. Good Write!

Men would probably get a thrill out of all the blowjobs but it didn't do alot for me.

Is there a Chapter Two?

Very believable and enjoyable. One of the best this month. Ignore the blowjob bashers, they probably want to but can't!

A billion blowjobs for nameless, silent men with a girl peeing in the open for light relief. Amout as erotic as dead parrot.

Clearly not aimed at female readers.

It started out like it was going to be a great story, and then you kind of lost me when it turned into nothing but a blowjob fest. I guess that for a few pages just doesn't get me too interested.

Promising start but I was soon bored by the repetition.

Great stories, hot, sexy, explicit and well written. Small mistakes in grammar, which an editor might have found.

Got hot reading the sories.

Kat

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good story about blowjobs wonderful and not a word about anal especially wonderful more detail about what was going on inside her mouth could have been a turn on but im just nit picking good

Most of the times it was the white people who massacred the Indians which refused to be chased from the lands where they had been living, so this is certainly another perspectieve on histiory, albeit a remarkable one. I award this disgusting story one star